Here are my comments- 1. You have not mention of either the trophic levels of the relationships between organisms. That was the main point of the project.
2. Overall not very organized, neat yes but there should be a general flow to the work and I shouldn't feel like I am searching for things.
3. The description of the biome was lacking in more detailed specifics. Again the project was about ecological interactions between a biome and the organisms that live in it.
4. I love the music and bird sounds. There were some very creative aspects to the project but you lost sight of what the point was.
you spelled reference incorrectly
ReplyDeleteHere are my comments-
ReplyDelete1. You have not mention of either the trophic levels of the relationships between organisms. That was the main point of the project.
2. Overall not very organized, neat yes but there should be a general flow to the work and I shouldn't feel like I am searching for things.
3. The description of the biome was lacking in more detailed specifics. Again the project was about ecological interactions between a biome and the organisms that live in it.
4. I love the music and bird sounds. There were some very creative aspects to the project but you lost sight of what the point was.
Overall a 27 out of 50